Progressive Headlines Guide Customers to Buy

Write Better Headlines | Online Copywriting 101Headlines are, without a doubt, one of the most important elements in copywriting.  As has been said countless times before, if you don’t get your visitor’s attention with the headline, the chance of them reading your copy is virtually none.  But headlines (and sub-headlines) play a vital part in the copywriting process for reasons other than capturing attention.

Whether we, as copywriters, like it or not, the fact is most people will not read all the copy word for word.  Headlines can help fill in the blanks in several ways so skimmers still get the gist of the information included in the copy. In the same way that tweets communicate in short bursts, so headlines and sub-headlines give a summary of your copy.


Headlines Outline the Benefits

Using headlines and subheads that state benefits about your product/service can be a powerful strategy.  Using wireless home networking for example, you might create headlines and subheads that read:


Work from Anywhere In Your Home

No More Jumbled Cables Strung Everywhere

Have Multiple Computers Online At the Same Time

Make All the Computer Users In Your Home Happy


Even if the customer didn’t read the copy included in between these heads and subheads, they would still be made aware of all the benefits of having a wireless home network.


Headlines Give an Overview

Depending on the type of copy, headlines can help urge your customers to read further.  In fact, in long-form copy and sales letters, headlines should create their own sub-set of copy.  If you read just the headlines, they should make sense all by themselves.  For example, copy about a new book on how to start your own business might use the following headlines.


New Book Takes You Step-by-Step Through Starting Your Own Business

An introduction would go here as well as copy designed to gain the attention of the reader.


Starting a Business Is Easier Than Ever

Continue with the copy here.


The Little Known Secrets in This Book Will Show You How

More copy here.


See?  As you read through the headlines and subheadlines they make sense even without any copy.  This serves to give an overview of the information to those customers who may not read every word of the copy you’ve written.  If they read just the headlines and subheads, they’ll still understand what you’re offering.


Headlines Can Raise Curiosity

Create “cliff-hangers” with your headlines and only give so much information before stopping.  When you use this and other interest builders, you can encourage customers to read further into your copy just to satisfy their curiosity.  Using natural gardening products as our example, the headlines and subheads often look like this:


My Roses Are Bursting With Blossoms Since I Stopped Watering Them

My Prize-Winning Tulips Would Wither Up and Die If It Weren’t for…

Which Annual Blooms Twice As Big When You Give It a Beer/Shampoo Cocktail?


These statements make you think.  They start the reader wondering so that he/she continues to read on to get the rest of the story.

When creating headlines in your copy, think about how they all work together.  Instead of just plopping bolded words in between paragraphs, create a plan revolving around progressive headlines that can lead your readers to buy.


Catch Karon Thackston’s enlightening session about writing headlines during Online Copywriting 101′s FREE 10-day telesummit. Mark your calendar for September 10, 2010 so you won’t miss a second of this hour-long session.  Get your FREE pass today at Online Copywriting 101.

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Leave A Reply (5 comments So Far)

  1. I am really looking forward to this copywriting seminar. Headlines are something that I have always heard the importance of, but have not really mastered too well:-(

    Thanks for the post!


    • karon
      626 days ago

      Great! I think you’ll get a lot out of that session… and all the sessions!


  2. Keisha
    623 days ago

    Karon,

    I understand the importance of headlines, but still find myself struggling to create them. I’m stuck in a rut of How to… and 5 Best…
    For now, I will focus on your strategy of using a benefit in the title with no direct mention of the product/service.

    This post really opened my eyes (again)-always good to have reminders!

    Thanks,
    Keisha


    • Karon Thackston
      623 days ago

      Just wait for my session on writing headline coming up on Sept. 10th, Keisha. It is sure to open your eyes and making creating them much less of a struggle.

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